Evidence of a Female Narrative? Viriginia Woolf vs James Joyce

Vanessa Redgrave as Mrs. Dalloway.Virginia Woolf once insisted that when women became the interpreters of life, not only would the subject matter and point of view of literature change, the very sentence structure of literature would change.

Woolf believed women processed information differently and expressed themselves differently. Woolf insisted that women, given the freedom to write as they think and speak, would give rise to a new narrative form: a female narrative.

At the time that Woolf proposed this idea; Victorian society was clearly defined by two spheres, the masculine sphere which involved politics and commerce, and the feminine sphere of the home and family. Gender roles and experience were strictly segregated, which lends credibility to Woolf’s argument, and we certainly see evidence of this emerging ‘voice’ when we compare the works of Virginia Woolf with another contemporary, James Joyce.

James Joyce, like Woolf, utilized a method known as stream of consciousness, a narrative method that allows the free flow of thoughts, sensations, and associations at multiple levels of awareness. Stream of consciousness focuses on the inner reality of characters rather than external events. By exposing the psychological realm of a character, modernist writers were able to address perception. This was the perfect vehicle for Woolf’s ‘female narrative’.

Comparing a passage from Mrs. Dalloway by Woolf and The Dead by Joyce, we can see how each writer utilizes stream of consciousness in a unique way, despite the very similar circumstances.

In Mrs. Dalloway, Clarissa is unsettled by the visit of her friend Peter Walsh:

What an extraordinary habit that was, Clarissa thought; always playing with a knife. Always making one feel, too, frivolous; empty-minded; a mere silly chatterbox, as he used. But I too, she thought, and, taking up her needle, summoned, like a Queen whose guards have fallen sleep and left her unprotected (she had been quite taken aback by this visit—it had upset her) so that any one can stroll in and have a look at her where she lies with the brambles curving over her, summoned to help her the things she did; the things she liked. (Woolf 44)

In The Dead, Gabriel is unsettled by a comment from his friend Miss Ivors:

He did not know how to meet her charge. He wanted to say literature was above politics. But they were friends of many years’ standing and their careers had been parallel, first at the University and then as teachers: he could not risk a grandiose phrase with her. He continued blinking his eyes and trying to smile and murmured lamely that he saw nothing political in writing reviews of books. (Joyce 31)

How are they different? First let’s look at the use of punctuation. Woolf uses punctuation to create a “spiraling” effect in her stream of consciousness, while Joyce uses punctuation to splice linear thoughts together.

In Mrs. Dalloway, the narration seems to begin with an external trigger (Peter and his knife) and move deeper and deeper into Clarissa’s internal world. Note how the first line is an opinion of Peter’s physical behavior, while the second line is Clarissa’s interpretation of Peter’s implied behavior. The third line metaphorically describes Clarissa’s response to Peter’s implied behavior (broken momentarily by a glimpse of HER physical behavior) followed by an explicate description of her emotional response. It is interesting to note that the core emotion is off set in parenthesis. This is the core of the paragraph. Structurally Woolf uses commas and parenthesis to shift perspectives and spiral down into the well-guarded emotion of Mrs. Dalloway, and then begins the process of backing out and focusing on the external world again.

In The Dead, Joyce uses commas in a much more traditional way: splicing and creating compound sentences. In the passage above, Gabriel is perplexed by a disparaging comment of a close friend, Miss Ivors. It is another situation where the external behavior upsets the protagonist. However, Gabriel’s response is more intellectual than emotional. He does not feel abandoned or “unguarded” as Clarissa does, but sees her comment as a head on challenge to his authority. Gabriel considers how he will “meet her charge.” Joyce does not take us deeper into Gabriel’s emotional core, but deeper into his intellectual core. Gabriel considers his response, considers the value of their relationship, and the impact of his response on that relationship. In the final sentence Gabriel acts, manifesting the response he finds logically appropriate.

Using metaphor to express the internal emotional experience and using grammar in a way that draws the reader further away from the external, into this introspective realm of women, Woolf succeeded in creating a new narrative perspective—one in Victorian England could indeed be termed ‘feminine.’

With the diffusing of these segregated roles, however, is the pursuit of a ‘feminine narrative’ still a valid concern? I’ll let you think about that until my next post.

Crow Adopts Lost Kitten–Amazing Video

Although I usually blog about writing, reading and the representation of women in literature, I had to take a moment to post this video.

One of the values found in my personal mission statement reads: “As a member of society, it is my task to model the benefits of cooperative coexistence.” I don’t think I have ever seen a video that embodies this idea more.

Live cooperatively, not competitively.

TriciaAres.com

TriciaAres.comWell today is a very exciting day. Not only am I participating in my first podcast interview, TriciaAres.com has just launched. That’s right, I now have my own website dedicated to my professional and creative writing. Fear not, I will continue to blog here at Modern Matriarch, where we are build an awesome community of like minded individuals. As always, my focus here at MM will be on empowering the female narrative, and there is still plenty to talk about.

TriciaAres.com will house my writing portfolio, overview of my experience and background, and updates on current projects and publications.  The contact page encourages others to reach out for more information on projects and services.

Feel free to stop by and check it out.

Well, I have to run, I don’t want to keep them waiting over at Wordsy.com.

My First Podcast Interview

SkypeYes I know, Skype was first invited in 2003, and your not so Modern Matriarch is just finding out about it. Let’s just say the evolution of Skype occurred during what I call “my corporate years,” and I can not be held liable for my ignorance of the outside world. Thanks to Hans Dekker at Wordsy.com, I am now slightly more modern than I was a week ago.

Next Sunday, I will be participating in my first podcast interview. When Mr. Dekker first asked me if I would be willing to do an interview via Skype, I said “Sure . . . What’s Skype?” (Yes, he found this response a bit amusing as he noted in wordsy podcast 13.) But, I am happy to announce that I am now plugged into the Skype community (tricia.ares) and looking forward to meeting new folks.

My interview with Mr. Dekker will be prerecorded, so as soon as it airs, I will certainly hotlink to it here at Modern Matriarch. In the meantime, I encourage you to check out the other Wordsy podcasts at wordsy.com.

Free Non-Fiction Writing Course

Good Morning readers. I have another busy day ahead of me, but before I jet off to my next virtual conference, I wanted to share something I discovered on Wordsy.com. Fiona Veitch Smith, a.k.a. the Crafty Writer, is sponsoring a free (yes you heard right–FREE) eight week non-fiction writing course. 

Ms. Smith is a freelance journalist, author, playwright and writing teacher based in Newcastle, England. WAIT! don’t click away, yet, location is not an issue. Although the course began on October 5th, YOU CAN STILL PARTICIPATE. Ms. Smith is offering the friday sessions on her blog where you can join the workshop online. (You can also review the sessions you’ve missed.) I know I’ll be there.

These are the topics she’s discussing:

  1. Opportunities for non-fiction writing, finding ideas, letters to the editor.
  2. Non-fiction writing styles: journalistic vs narrative prose. Keeping it brief.
  3. Blogging and other internet opportunities.
  4. Writing from life. Autobiography and opinion pieces.
  5. Articles for specialist magazines.
  6. Travel writing.
  7. Writing a non-fiction book proposal and approaching editors.
  8. Copyright, libel and finance.

See you there!

Discover Your Expertise: Women’s Media Summit Day 3

Women often underestimate their level of expertise.One thing the Summit has taught me is how often women underestimate their level of “expertise.” For years, I have viewed my own learning as “self-improvement.” I wonder how many women do the same. How many women acquire a substantial wealth of knowledge without realizing how valuable it is to others? How many realize the value of their knowledge but feel they lack the authority to share it with others?

Can you write down ten things you are an expert in?

Here’s my (current) list:

1. Analyzing Literature
2. Writing
3. Motivational Speaking
4. Networking
5. Cooperative vs Competitive Lifestyles
6. The Value of the Matriarchal Perspective
7. Travel and Permanent Relocation
8. Study Abroad
9. Self Actualization
10. Managing as a Work at Home Mom

What makes you an expert?

Some people mistake “expertise” for “credentials.” Expertise is the experience gained through practice and the revision of knowledge. Credentials, on the other hand, are merely the external validation of that expertise.

For instance, I have an expertise in both writing and analyzing literature because I read a lot and I write a lot. I also allow others to critique my work, challenging my perspective. By opening myself up to feedback, and valuing my mistakes as learning tools, I create opportunities to revise my knowledge, increasing my expertise.

My credentials in writing and analyzing literature include the Bachelor’s degree I have obtained, the master’s degree I am pursuing, and the numerous articles, short stories, and critical essays I have published.

When will others recognized your expertise?

First, you must recognize what you’re an expert in, and then you must start building your credentials. Yes, it’s that simple, but the first step starts with you.

So I’ll ask you again, Can you write down ten things you’re an expert in? Of course, you can. Now write them in the comments section, so we can all share in your wealth of knowledge.

For more information on increasing your credentials and exposure as an expert, check out the Women’s Media Summit audio files.

Women’s Media Summit Day 2

What goes around, comes around. What are you sending out in the world?Talk about paying forward, Heidi Richards, CEO of WECAI Network, is racking up some serious karma for putting together the Women’s Media Summit. You could buy a BMW for the price of a Scion and still not get a better deal then the $57 I paid for this conference. The knowledge and inspiration gleaned from the presenters is absolutely invaluable.

For me, the Women’s Media Summit does more than just educate women on the ins and outs of building a positive media relationship; it illustrates the power of positive relationships in general.

globe 2A shady friend is a parent’s worst nightmare. If you’re a parent, you know what I’m talking about. If you had friends that worried your parents, you know what I’m talking about. Parents worry about our friends because experience has taught them an important lesson. We are influenced by others. If you surround yourself with people who practice deceit and manipulation, you’re values and quality of life will be compromised.

The presenters at the Women’s Media Summit uphold the law of abundance. There’s enough out there for everyone. The women at this conference truly want to help other women harvest that abundance.

globe 3If you truly want to live abundantly, to live cooperatively instead of competitively, be diligent. Surround yourself with peers who live that way to; people who focus on paying it forward instead of paying it back. Women’s Media Summit is a great place to start.

If you would like to participate in the summit or purchase the audio files visit: www.thewomensmediasummit.com.

Special thanks to yesterdays presenters:

Shannon Cherry, founder and president of Cherry Communications and its subsidiaries, Be Heard Solutions and Penny Pinching Publicity. www.cherrycomcast.com

Beverly Mahone, author of Whatever! A Baby Boomer’s Journey Into Middle Age www.talk2bev.com

Lori Prokop, co-founder of Keyboard Culture Blog Community www.keyboard-culture.com

Raleigh Pinskey, of The Raleigh Group and author of the international best selling 101 Ways to Promote Yourself (Harper Collins)www.RalieghPinskey.com

Women’s Media Summit Day 1

Up with the Sun!Good Morning Everyone (* said in a hushed whisper). Well, at least it’s morning as I write this—6 am to be exact. It’s still dark outside and even in this Miami suburb, the world is shrouded in a blanket of semi-silence. The steady chirp of crickets is broken only occasionally by the sound of a drowsy automobile rolling off to an early start.

As a freelance writer who works from home, this is my moment of Zen. I try to get the bulk of my writing done during these lulls, even if it means waking up at 5 am everyday.

Soon my day will be filled with the constant influx of communication: email, cell-phone, fax, even the UPS man delivering gallies or review copies. While I am attempting to juggle the calls and correspondence with the utmost professionalism, my three-year-old daughter shares her latest picture of daddy and chases the cat under the table.

This is the face of the changing workforce. Women, often frustrated and underrepresented in the corporate world, are choosing to go it alone. Taking their hard earned knowledge and experience, they are starting their own businesses, setting up shop on their own terms. This new work force even has a name—Mompreneurs.

Just because you’ve decided to head out on your own doesn’t mean you have to do it alone. In fact, you can’t do it a lone. You have to get your name out there, exposure yourself to the community. It’s not just enough to network (although that is vital), you have to generate a media presence in order to establish your credibility and really drive your business.

As a freelance writer, writing alone is not enough. My writing has to actually reach people. Writing skill and fabulous content mean nothing without an audience. As a writer, building a relationship with the media is crucial. But were do we start?

The Women’s Media Summit, has the answers. The Women’s Media Summit gathers exceptional media, PR, and marketing professionals together in one spot: you’re home office! That’s right, no airfare, no expensive accommodations, no child care issues. For only $57 (no that’s not a typo), Mompreneurs from across the country will attend four days of virtual presentations.

The Women’s Media Summit is multimedia and interactive. What I learned from the first speaker alone was well worth the investment.

Yesterday, Kirsten Osolind, CEO of Re:invention Marketing, opened the summit with a presentation on “Being Notable and Quotable.” Her statistics on the under-representation of women in the media are astounding:

• Women make up only 21% of all people featured in the news
• Women represent only 14 % of all company spokespersons and 17% of all experts quoted in the news.
• Women are most often presented in the media as voices expressing personal experience
• Women are twice as likely as men to be portrayed as victims in the news.
• Women represent a mere 14 percent of all Sunday morning political talk show guest appearances.

So with the odds stacked against Momprenuers, how do we get in the media? In her presentation Osolind, provides tips on how to become more notable and quotable using the Re:Invention BNQ model and how to build credibility through the Terrific Trifecta and online resources.

If the Women’s Media Summit sounds like something you want to participate in, there is still time to register, but hurry! Presentations begin today at 3pm (Eastern time). You can also order audio files or CDs of the Seminar, as well. Just visit www.womensmediasummit.com.

To learn more about Re:Invention Marketing go to: www.reinventioninc.com or visit their award winning blog at www.reinventioninc.blogspot.com

Oh! One final statistic: Although women make up 50% of the blogging community only 13% make the top 100 list among national advertising agencies . . . hmmmm. Looks like I have some more work to do.

Sexual Politics and Mrs. Dalloway

Feminine SphereWhen I left my corporate job to stay at home with my toddler, some of my peers felt I was taking the easy way out, or assumed I was leaving because I just couldn’t hack it in the real world. The truth is my job just wasn’t helping me fulfill my personal mission statement. I found it difficult to manifest my values in that environment, so I did something about it.

It amazes me how there is still this underlying tension between career moms and stay at home moms. Wasn’t the feminist movement about allowing women a choice?

In one of my graduate courses, we’re currently discussing Mrs. Dalloway by Virginia Woolf. Some of the students find the character offensive, the epitome of everything the feminist movement is against.

At this point, I feel I should stop and ask, why does feminism have to be against anything? Shouldn’t feminism be about helping women achieve their own goals? You may argue: but what about issues like spousal abuse? As women, shouldn’t we be against that? I don’t see anything wrong with the cause, only the perspective.

When Mother Theresa was asked to join an anti-war march, she said, “No, but when you have a peace march, I’ll be there.”

Of course, I agree women should not be pummeled at the hands of their spouses. But rather than being anti-abuse, shouldn’t we be pro-education, empowering women with the knowledge that they are valuable members of society. A proud woman won’t let anyone beat her.

But I digress, back to Virginia Woolf. In discussing the novel, the professor posed this question:

“In her ground breaking 1978 work SEXUAL POLITICS, Kate Millett attacked Virginia Woolf for having “glorified two housewives, Mrs. Ramsay [the protagonist of To The Lighthouse] and Mrs. Dalloway….” Show why you think this criticism is or is not appropriate.”

The questioned incited feminist debate. For some, Mrs. Dalloway is the story of a silly woman concerned with flowers and a dinner party. Others recognize how conflicted the character really is.

As I researched my response, I returned to this passage in A Room of Ones Own:

“[I]t is obvious that the values of women differ very often from the values which have been made by the other sex; naturally, this is so. Yet it is the masculine values that prevail. Speaking crudely, football and sport are ‘important’; the worship of fashion, the buying of clothes ‘trivial.’ And these values are inevitably transferred from life to fiction. This is an important book the critic assumes, because it deals with war. This is an insignificant book because it deals with the feelings of women in a drawingroom.”

As I read this passage, I pondered contemporary literary criticism. Has anything really changed? The assumption that stay at home moms simply lack ambition seems to suggest that the values Woolf defined as “feminine” may still be viewed as trivial. Unfortunately, career moms illustrate how men are not the only ones capable of dismissing these values. In the 21st century, women who choose to honor “feminine” values can find themselves trivialized by both men and women. So much for empowering women to make their own choices.

Cooking Up New Ideas: Multi-tasking Your Way to Creative Nonfiction

Magic Circle.Yesterday, I spent most of my day at the computer, pushing myself to reach various deadlines. Juggling both short term and long term goals, I often find myself working on many different projects at once. Although it takes a lot of organization (and a lot of caffeine), I manage to get it done. Like an experienced chef, you learn how to time everything to come up at once and how to stir many pots at the same time. For some it may look like spontaneous magic. For others it may look like a well rehearsed dance. But the chef (and the writer) knows it’s the combination of practice and improvisation.

One of my favorite things about cooking is the aroma, the smell of all those ingredients in each dish melding together. That melding together of ingredients happens when you’re a writer, as well. And just as that process of cooking inspires new recipes, juggling multiple writing projects inspires new ideas. It doesn’t matter what genre you’re writing in. In fact, it’s helpful if you’re writing in more than one at a time.

Most readers polarize writing into two general categories: fiction and non-fiction. They equate fiction with creative writing and the imagination and non-fiction with the organized presentation of fact. Writers realize that the world of writing is not really that black and white, though. That genres blend and merge like aromas in a kitchen, inspiring new recipes.

In her essay, “But Tell It Slant: From Poetry to Prose and Back Again,” Judith Ortiz Cofer opens with the example of the same experience told two different ways. First she expresses it as a poem. Ortiz notes that “[t]he poem is closer to my emotional memory of this incident.” Then she writes about it in prose, “an exploration that began with the facts of the event.” Both of these are mere versions of what really happened.

Personal essays, journals, memoirs, biography, meditation and nature writing are all forms of creative non-fiction. Just as good fiction is organized and often well researched, good non-fiction is entertaining. This takes creativity.

When you start writing fiction and non-fiction simultaneously, you’ll begin to see that they have a lot in common. Your fiction and non-fiction will begin to inform one another, inspire one another. So don’t be afraid to take on multiple projects. Learning to stir all those pots at once will take a little practice, but the melding of ingredients will fill your mind with new possibilities and the results will be satisfying.